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In English / High School | 2025-07-07

Punctuation: Complete this passage by adding commas where appropriate:

Tommy woke up early on the morning of the school trip, packed his bag twice as quickly as usual, and ate breakfast really fast. He ran all the way to school, almost bumping into his best friend as he reached the school gates. He had never been to the zoo before, and Mr. Thompson had promised that there would be hippos, tigers, snakes, and more! Tommy's biggest wish was to see a lion, though. He knew lions had huge teeth, big claws, and a loud roar, but he wanted to see it for himself.

Asked by boithamakomanno

Answer (2)

The passage has been corrected by adding necessary commas for clarity and proper sentence structure. Each sentence now separates ideas and items clearly. This punctuation helps improve the flow and readability of the text.
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Answered by gangakandel994 | 2025-07-07

Here's your passage with commas correctly added where needed:
Corrected passage:
Tommy woke up early on the morning of the school trip, packed his bag twice as quickly as usual, and ate breakfast really fast. He ran all the way to school, almost bumping into his best friend as he reached the school gates. He had never been to the zoo before, and Mr. Thompson had promised that there would be hippos, tigers, snakes, and more! Tommy's biggest wish was to see a lion, though. He knew lions had huge teeth, big claws, and a loud roar, but he wanted to see it for himself. ;

Answered by gangakandel994 | 2025-07-07